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Everything Hidden By A Smile

A smile is but a simple mask in which we can use to tell people that everything is going to be okay. All I have to do is keep on smiling. I cannot show my weakness, no not now. I have put in way too much effort for me to blow off any of these chances now. But how long can I hold this mask on for. I will have to break eventually, nothing ever lasts. I dread what happens when my mask fails.

From the outside my life looks mostly good. There are some obvious improvements but I am still going well. This is great and all, but to me it is not enough. I don't know if it ever will be enough. I might be doing these things that I have only dreamed of,

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Submitted: January 21, 2012
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Make:SONY
Model:DSLR-A700
Shutter Speed:1/60 second
Aperture:F/8.0
Focal Length:30 mm
ISO Speed:100
Date Taken:Jan 19, 2012, 2:16:34 PM
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French Soldier Ready Aim, Fire!by =Sexy-Grim

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This was taken on the second day of shooting. The gun is real, and the costume is acurate of the time.

Critique by !neoncrown Apr 18, 2012, 8:34:50 PM

I feel like this one is a bit flat compared to the others. It just doesn't have the same DEPTH, I think that's what throws me off a little. I love the perspective, but everything looks a little too---clean. Somehow it just doesn't look enough like a fully formed shot. The light is perfect, but the cloth behind you, and the pose doesn't look enough like you're going out to fight.

I think you're doing amazingly as a model, and this isn't about your skill, but the way it was set up, instead. I would love to have seen it grittier, like a fight. I think that the right background and more dirt would make it even more amazing, but this is downright awesome!

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Critique by !AnimeFanGirl365 Apr 18, 2012, 11:36:41 AM

this picture is amazing i its very seriose and cute at the same time! but i think the backround should of been better

the clothing is amazing too! the gun is a great effct too to match the clothing. but it looks like your smiling behind the gun so it gives away some of the serisose but its sill an amzing picture!

. i also think youshould have done a diffent pose while pointing the gun

. the hat to the costome is great too. the lighting is very good it makes the clothing look very bright which is good in my opinon very great work keep it up!^_^