I really love how this picture turned out. It was taken in my most recent model shoot. There was a huge problem during the capturing of this and other pieces. I started having an allergic reaction after being bitten by a mosquito. I am glad that the reaction has been able to be edited away. Bur=t other than that this is me. While I was looking at this picture the thought of try before you buy entered my head. So I thought try before you buy is done at product launches, and the new product is me.
Nice work! I could never model--not enough patience XD I love the lighting--tell whomever took it, that they are wonderful for me!---but I feel like there could be something extra, something to make it even more fantastic. One suggestion though, not referencing that, is to close your eyes just a tad, it feels kind of off to me to have bother of your eyes mostly open--but that's just me, so maybe not.
Anyway, I really like this piece, it has a lot of impact, the lighting is IMPECCABLE, the pose is not as original, but still good, and the vision isn't as formed, I suppose, as well as usual, but it is still amazing! good luck with your modeling career!
Again, very nice! I like the post for this one much better :3 It looks natural and comfortable.
I do still like the black backdrop, but for this one it makes it quite hard to see your undies. xD Perhaps, as the other critique suggested, another color for this particular photo?
The only other thing I can think of that would enhance this is a bit more lighting, especially on your face. You have this nice "come play" smoldery expression, but it's almost lost because of how much shadow there is around your head. Perhaps a bit more contrast would fix this too.
I love the lighting--tell whomever took it, that they are wonderful for me!---but I feel like there could be something extra, something to make it even more fantastic. One suggestion though, not referencing that, is to close your eyes just a tad, it feels kind of off to me to have bother of your eyes mostly open--but that's just me, so maybe not.
Anyway, I really like this piece, it has a lot of impact, the lighting is IMPECCABLE, the pose is not as original, but still good, and the vision isn't as formed, I suppose, as well as usual, but it is still amazing! good luck with your modeling career!
I do still like the black backdrop, but for this one it makes it quite hard to see your undies. xD Perhaps, as the other critique suggested, another color for this particular photo?
The only other thing I can think of that would enhance this is a bit more lighting, especially on your face. You have this nice "come play" smoldery expression, but it's almost lost because of how much shadow there is around your head. Perhaps a bit more contrast would fix this too.
I do, also, love your hair.
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